lament of a sea geisha
Serene naiad, fleeting kelpie, insatiable mermaid; spirits of the sea always desist in Japan. Triton requests four new Guardians for a life of ever-lasting turmoil - Why oh why do we apply? Before you know it we'll be in a liquid tower, like Naminé, painting down our memories and diving into the sea-world when we want to forget about our hearts. White-faced geisha dwell in the jungle, the ocean smells of cherry blossoms; every day clockwork samurai march outside my window but every day I do not see them. It is a cursed place not meant for humans; unicorns, geisha, witch doctors but never humans. And yet, we can never leave, because the fate of the world depends on our misery (our willingness to forget).
Woooooooow. So wonderful and creepy, along with such sorrow. I love how there was a strong story going on here. The way you meshed Japanese culture and images with that of the sea left me breathless.
ReplyDeleteAnd when you say Namine, do you mean Namine from Kingdom Hearts? The bits you wrote about memory and hearts made me think of her. If I'm right, let me just say that she's my favorite character. I think she deserves more time in the new games (if they give her any at all >.>) and she should end up with Riku. Meh. (Roxas is like a brother... being made from the same people as Namine was, you know? Haha).
Sorry if I got geeky :)
Also, I wanted to say that as one of my online projects, I'm writing a mermaid story. It's serial, so slowly but surely I finish the chapters, but perhaps you might want to read it in your spare time. It's called "Cinnamon." :)
'Shiki Soku Ze Ku Ku Soku Ze Shiki'!
ReplyDeleteSea geisha and clockwork samurai, goodness. This is the most original and beautiful thing I have read in ages. The entire Asian theme merged with fairytale/myth, it is truly otherwordly, ethereal. I haven't read anything like this before. But I don't know why I am so astonished by it. I shouldn't expect any less than amazing from you, my dear. This is brilliant. You are the most marvellous storyweaver. xxxx
ReplyDeleteOh, wow. I agree with Thea. This is just so so original. I've not read a piece this good for many weeks, and even then, the quality and thoughtfulness wasn't as ardent and acute as this. Just.. amazing. xxxx
ReplyDeleteOh, my dear. I am truly at a loss for words. This piece is everything, it has everything anyone could want when they read. Your stories are just brilliant and I cherish the moments that I get to read them, they just send me off to other worlds entirely! Thea, and Joanna are quite right, it is like none other.
ReplyDeletexx and hugs
Jhordyn
CloudyKim: I do! <3 Kingdom Hearts is one of my favorite games ever, it really made a lasting impression on me. One day, I hope my writing can feel like what that game made me feel. :) I would love to read your story! It might be a few days (am swamped with school work at present), but I will definitely read it. Mermaids are a favorite topic of mine. xx
ReplyDeletePS: I read your story about the caged girl a few weeks ago and I found it to be absolutely LOVELY!
Cinnamon: I desperately want to learn Japanese. -_- xxx
Thea: I really, really appreciate your words, star-bird. <3 It has been so difficult to write lately and I really had to push myself to sit down and write something new, but I'm so glad I did! It's kind souls like all of you that keep me going, thank you so very much! xxxx
Joanna: You lie. xxxxxxxxxxx
Jhordyn Ashley: Thank you for your encouragement and sweet thoughts! You are always such a comfort to me, and your words will forever be close to my heart. xx
This has such a mournfulness and such sinister undertones! Tantalizingly beautiful, as well. You have talent, undeniably! <3
ReplyDeleteThank you! x3 You mean so, so much to me, dear Melee.
ReplyDeleteEssentially, what it means is: 'Form becomes emptiness, emptiness form.'- The Heart Sutra. It's one of the basic Zen teachings. It's meant to express the non-duality of reality. I wish I could speak it, too! XXX.
ReplyDeleteYou are a wonderful story teller, truly amazing, very talented.
ReplyDeleteThankyou for your comment. You are too kind, hopefully I will get more confidence:)
xx Carina
ethereal. I like the way you tell stories.
ReplyDeleteIncredible! So incredible, dear.
ReplyDeleteCinnamon: Oh! I really like that religion. xxxxx
ReplyDeleteCarina: You have no reason to be shy, you're absolutely gorgeous. Thanks! <3
Michelle: Thank you! x3
Mckenzie: Thank you so much! :) x
Yeah, I don't do religion, it makes my skin crawl! I'm an Atheist, but Zen philosophy just makes so much sense! I like how you're into such a wide variety of things, it helps makes a person more rounded in a sense. Well adjusted, if you get my meaning!
ReplyDeleteThank you! :3 Sometimes I think I have too many interests, though, so that I'm a little spread thin and merely average at things.
ReplyDeletelovelovelove this.
ReplyDeleteNot sure about religion myself. I just do not think I could quite worship things. I do believe in solipsism, though.
I don't think religion is so very important as people make it out to be. x
ReplyDeleteThank you, love!